2022 Redemption Game Logo Competition - Phase 2

We're in phase 2 of this competition, which will run through the end of the Day December 9th.
In this phase, the creators of the two submissions will be able to receive feedback here, and update their logo as many times as they wish, before voting starts December 10th.

Anyone who did not make a submission can give feedback in this thread on the logos submitted.

Here are the submissions.
Full album: https://imgur.com/a/Mi13NKh

Entry 1: Richard Bronish (Carolina Reapers)
Full sized image link: https://i.imgur.com/onIYdCE.png


Entry 2: Frank Duarte (Kansas City Buffaloes)
Full sized image link: https://i.imgur.com/6wrwOaL.png

First thing I'll point out, is that the Redemption Game will take place Sunday July 24, 2022 (so Frank, you'll have to fix that).

Again, two great entries, so this should be a close competition.

Both entries are great, but just wanted to point out that Lumen is misspelled.

Good thing I have an opportunity to fix this.

One thing I'd actually like to change with my logo is the bottom right water section. I'm not liking how that lighter blue looks, to give the impression that's water there.
Any thoughts?

Both look great ! Austin, I was drawing a blank in regards to an idea for a logo for you to tweak. Maybe by the time the next competition comes around I`ll have some creative juices flowing again.

Curtis wrote:Both look great ! Austin, I was drawing a blank in regards to an idea for a logo for you to tweak. Maybe by the time the next competition comes around I`ll have some creative juices flowing again.

No problem at all. I think the last competition of the year is All-Star Game uniforms, which a lot of people got into last year (which of course, I think most people are here because of uniforms and the GUD to begin with). I think you won that one last time, so I know you'll have a great idea for that. That competition will go back to individual, since you all have done a really good job with uniform designs for all your teams.
I want to start that one soon-ish, but with the holidays coming up, I want to make sure I give a good amount of time for that.

Here's a update to fix the text, and an update to the water lines in the bottom right.



Any opinions on which is better for the water part?

Last day for either participant to make changes to their logo.
If you make / have made changes, you must email me your final design that you want to submit by the end of today. Voting will begin tomorrow.

I think I've found a better way to do the water section



Lighter color for the water, and lighter water lines, and make it a little more active with a waterfall.

Austin, I will email you today my final design.